The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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changes, in the form of new technologies and advancements, are likely to affect people's Use synonyms
health
status both positively and negatively. Technology can shape new and less healthier lifestyles, Use synonyms
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health
care system and new treatments.
Current advances in many aspects of Use synonyms
life
that will continue in the Use synonyms
future
may lower the standard Use synonyms
health
condition of the majority of people. In the Use synonyms
future
, it is predictable that more people will become more dependent on transportations, even for smaller distances, rather than walking and more dependant on elevators rather than climbing the stairs. Use synonyms
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addition, with people being more workaholic it is unlikely that many people will have the time to regularly practice sports or go to the gym. Not to forget mentioning the increasing popularity of fast food among people as they are quick to prepare and delicious. These three factors, either consciously or Suggestion
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subconciously
, will direct people to a from the subconscious mind
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life style
that lacks regular exercise and healthy food leading to higher incidences of obesity and chronic diseases a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
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diabestes
.
a polygenic disease characterized by abnormally high glucose levels in the blood; any of several metabolic disorders marked by excessive urination and persistent thirst
diabetes
On the other hand
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possible that the general Linking Words
health
and quality of Use synonyms
life
of people will be higher. In the Use synonyms
future
, it will be possible to detect a wide range of diseases early, before the appearance of symptoms or disabilities, using technologies with higher quality. Use synonyms
Also
, many of the currently untreatable diseases will have a cure in the Linking Words
future
either by new drugs or new surgeries. These two factors have a high potentiality to increase the quality of Use synonyms
life
and living with fewer disabilities for longer periods of time.
To summerise, many factors are currently affecting and will continue to contribute to the average Use synonyms
health
of people in the Use synonyms
future
. Some of the factors are positive and some are negative. Use synonyms
Although
it might be difficult to completely exclude the negative factors from people's lives, it will be wise to seek ways have decreased the effects of negative factors as much as possibleLinking Words
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