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Economic progress is one way to measure a country’s success. Some people believe that there are other factors should be considered when measuring the success of a country. What are the factors? Do you think there is a factor that is more important than the others?

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Manifold people reckon that a successful nation is what economic development is all about.
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, someone believes that other elements should be taken into consideration during the process of estimating the level of
success
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 of a certain
country
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. From my understanding about
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 statement I will mention some factors and give my opinion about theirs importance.
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 and foremost, not only economic progress, but there are
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 other factors which play pivotal roles in one
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's growth.
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, cultural development or educational achievement... Ought to be mentioned as a pivotal element. Since if a nation wants to grow it means that it has to improve all aspects for the smallest to the biggest one
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 of just concentrate on the economy so that economic progress is not the only method for us to estimate a
country
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's
success
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. But
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, every
country
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 should be aware of its strength to develop as fast as possible, it means that there will be a factor
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 far more essential to pay attention than the others depending on one
country
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's innate condition.
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, US and UK are developing countries famous for their well-made educational systems which can attract a lot of oversea students bringing big profit to these nations while Switzerland or Italia are well-known cultural areas which are visited by millions of visitors a year. As evidences above, we can see that different countries have discrepant methods to get better and become
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success
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successful
 nations. To sum up, economic progress is not the factor in measuring a certain
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's
success
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 and other elements should be named in that list.
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, we have no specific form of
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 for every
country
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 so it is always obvious that there is a factor
that is
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 more important than the others
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