Many people are opting for holistic medicine rather than conventional medicine as a form of treatment for incurable diseases. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such practice? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In today's world where there are huge
phamaceuticle
of or relating to pharmacy or pharmacists
pharmaceutical
companies producing medicines using various drugs and
steriods
any of several fat-soluble organic compounds having as a basis 17 carbon atoms in four rings; many have important physiological effects
steroids
many people are moving
towads
near
towards
toward
holistic
medicine
rather than conventional
medicine
as a form of
treatment
for incurable diseases. The holistic
medicine
has its own advantages and disadvantages over conventional
madicines
the branches of medical science that deal with nonsurgical techniques
medicine
. These advantages can range from no chemicals to low financial burden on patients to addressing several conditions. They use natural methods, foods and medicines
such
as herbs to help eliminate
symptoms
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the symptoms
and address the causes of the issue the
patient
is dealing with. As the
madicines
the branches of medical science that deal with nonsurgical techniques
medicines
are all
naturall
in accordance with nature; relating to or concerning nature
natural
naturally
neutral
in
nature there
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nature, there
cost of
procurment
the act of getting possession of something
procurement
is
relitively
in a relative manner; by comparison to something else
relatively
cheapper
relatively low in price or charging low prices
cheaper
sharper
than the conventional medicines.
On the other hand
the disadvantages of holistic
medicine
could be taking
longer time
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a longer time
to work, might interact with certain medication which are already being taken by the
patient
. It usually takes several hours or even months before you can see any positive effects.
This
can be discouraging for some.
On the other
hand as
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hand, as
conventional medicines work for specific
purposes they
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purposes, they
act faster and heals the person faster. Alternative
medicine
is not as classically scientific as conventional
medicine
is which makes it more of an individual basis
treatment
method.
Also each
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Also, each
patient
is treated separately from the
next
, which means not all
treatment
methods react well or even work with every
patient
.
Finally
, Due to the rather recent introduction of alternative
medicine
there is not as much research on
this
treatment
method as there is for conventional
medicine
. While new research is being discovered every day, compared to standard
medicine
the research surrounding alternative
medicine
is rather limited. At the
end i
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end, I
end I
would like to conclude that it is not bad to go for holistic
medicine
over conventional
madicine
the branches of medical science that deal with nonsurgical techniques
medicine
medicines
, but one should check his/her doctor before visiting him/her.
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