Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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One of the biggest
concern
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concerns
for many developing and developed countries is to find ways to reduce or eliminate various pollutions. It is believed that by increasing the
cost
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of
fuel
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for vehicles can solve environmental issues. I moderately agree with
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opinion and think that
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to
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there are various other methods to reduce the
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of pollutions
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as introducing battery operated vehicles, and planting more trees.
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of all, I believed that increasing the
fuel
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cost
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will limit the usage of cars or other vehicles which in turn reduce the
level
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of
pollution
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to some extent.
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, introducing battery operated vehicles can drastically decrease the levels of environmental
pollution
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such
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as
air
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pollution
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, as there will be no CO2 emissions. A good example to illustrate
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idea is
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the everlasting beauty
an everlasting beauty
of
Switzerland where
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Switzerland, where
government has
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banned
the
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operated vehicles and make it compulsory for all its citizens to use eco-friendly cars in order to protect the environment they live in.
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, not only increasing the
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of
fuel
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can reduce the
level
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of
pollution
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, but
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introducing eco-friendly cars can help to reduce the
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of pollutions in
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air
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the air
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, planting more trees is a natural way to clean
air
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, water and soil.
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, Trees
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play
an important role during the process of photosynthesis in which trees take in CO2 and produce the oxygen we breathe and
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improve the quality of
air
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.
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to
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, it
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also help
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also helps
has also helped
to conserve water, preserve soil and support wildlife. Switzerland is a prime example
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of
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an initiative where planting trees are applauded whereas trading of wood, cutting trees for furniture’s are strictly prohibited and considered
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a serious offence
which may even
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result
in
life time
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
prison. To conclude, I moderately agree that not only increasing the
cost
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of
fuel
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will help reduce the environmental
issues but
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issues, but
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believes that use of battery as a
fuel
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and planting more trees can drastically improve the quality of
environment
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the environment
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental sustainability
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • public transportation
  • carbon footprint
  • economic incentives
  • alternative energy vehicles
  • fuel-efficient
  • government subsidies
  • economic disparity
  • urban planning
  • rural infrastructure
  • sustainable development
  • carbon tax
  • green technology
  • demand elasticity
  • energy conservation
  • climate change mitigation
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