Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

One of the biggest
concern
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concerns
for many developing and developed countries is to find ways to reduce or eliminate various pollutions. It is believed that by increasing the
cost
of
fuel
for vehicles can solve environmental issues. I moderately agree with
this
opinion and think that
in addition
to
this
there are various other methods to reduce the
level
of pollutions
such
as introducing battery operated vehicles, and planting more trees.
First
of all, I believed that increasing the
fuel
cost
will limit the usage of cars or other vehicles which in turn reduce the
level
of
pollution
to some extent.
However
, introducing battery operated vehicles can drastically decrease the levels of environmental
pollution
such
as
air
pollution
, as there will be no CO2 emissions. A good example to illustrate
this
idea is
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the everlasting beauty
an everlasting beauty
of
Switzerland where
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Switzerland, where
government has
ban
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banned
the
fuel
operated vehicles and make it compulsory for all its citizens to use eco-friendly cars in order to protect the environment they live in.
Thus
, not only increasing the
cost
of
fuel
can reduce the
level
of
pollution
, but
also
introducing eco-friendly cars can help to reduce the
level
of pollutions in
air
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the air
.
Secondly
, planting more trees is a natural way to clean
air
, water and soil.
In other words
, Trees
plays
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play
an important role during the process of photosynthesis in which trees take in CO2 and produce the oxygen we breathe and
thus
improve the quality of
air
.
In addition
to
this
, it
also help
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also helps
has also helped
to conserve water, preserve soil and support wildlife. Switzerland is a prime example
for
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of
such
an initiative where planting trees are applauded whereas trading of wood, cutting trees for furniture’s are strictly prohibited and considered
serious offence
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a serious offence
which may even
results
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result
in
life time
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
prison. To conclude, I moderately agree that not only increasing the
cost
of
fuel
will help reduce the environmental
issues but
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issues, but
also
believes that use of battery as a
fuel
and planting more trees can drastically improve the quality of
environment
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the environment
.
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  • environmental sustainability
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • public transportation
  • carbon footprint
  • economic incentives
  • alternative energy vehicles
  • fuel-efficient
  • government subsidies
  • economic disparity
  • urban planning
  • rural infrastructure
  • sustainable development
  • carbon tax
  • green technology
  • demand elasticity
  • energy conservation
  • climate change mitigation
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