A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter … tell your friend about the job …what sort of work it involves …say why you think the job would be suitable for him …explain how to apply for the job Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any address. Begin your letter as follows Dear….,

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Dear Ahmed, It's been a long time since I
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heard from you. Your
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letter in which you asked me to help you find a job here has, not only made me very happy
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kept me on my toes for any opportunity that might show up. Guess what! It has! Yes, believe it or not; I have found you, not your dream one, but a one you can start with. The job offer is in a very well-known company that works in cosmetics. They have lately announced their need for a number of sales representatives for their products. They need a university graduate who is energetic and outgoing. They
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said in their advertisement that he should have an international driving license. The
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condition they requested in a successful candidate is a minimum
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year of experience in the sales field. All the qualifications they are asking for are already there. All you need to do now is to log onto the internet, type
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link and fill out the application. The
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sit back and wait for the happy phone call. Congratulations in advance! Wishing you all the best of luck! Yours’ Sammy
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