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People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, or to increase knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Many
people
 attend
to
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university
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collage
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 after their high school years for several
reason
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reasons
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. I believe that the most common reason why
people
 attend
to
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university
 or
collage
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college
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is to have new experiences
on
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in
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 life, to prepare for a
career
, and to
increase
 their
knowledge
 of their personality.
Firstly
, many
people
 attend
to
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university
 or
collage
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college
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 to have new
experience
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experiences
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on
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 life. Many
students
 leave their
home
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homes
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 and move to live by
them self
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themself
themselves
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 when they go to
university
.
This
 is the first time that they have to make a resolution on their own, without their parents’ help. Making their own decisions will
increase
 their
knowledge
 of
them self
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themself
themselves
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.
Moreover
,
students
on
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 the
university
 can meet different
students
 from different nationalities and religions so
students
 can learn about different
culture
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cultures
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 around the world.
Secondly
, many
people
 go to
university
 or
collage
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college
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 to prepare for a
career
.
Career
 training is becoming more important nowadays to young
people
 compared to old
people
. At
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college
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collage
,
students
 learn many skills for their
career
 and they intern an internship with a lot of chances. All of these things prepare them for their
career
.
Also
,
students
 attend
university
 or
collage
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college
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 to
increase
 their self-
knowledge
 of their personality
on
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 life. They attend for that to
increase
 their
knowledge
in
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of
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 different subjects which they find interesting.
For example
, many
students
 study science because they
are interest
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are interested
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 in science but they work on other types of business.
To sum up
, I think
people
 should not only focus
a
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career
 when they go to
university
 or
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college
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collage
. They have to follow
about
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their personality and the great world around them
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in
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which they live
in
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to have new
experience
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experiences
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 and
knowledge
.
People
 attend college or
university
 for many different reasons (
for example
, new experiences,
career
 preparation, or to
increase
knowledge
). Why do you think
people
 attend college or
university
? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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