You are going to visit New Zealand for an ‘English and Homestay’ program.You have just received details of your homestay host family. Write your first letter to the family.In your letter •introduce yourself •ask the family some questions to get information that is important to you •tell the family about your arrival date and time

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Dear Mr Johnson, I have just received details of my English Homestay programme at your family and writing to introduce myself and ask for some information. I would like to thank you for agreeing to host me. My name is Umida, I am 16 years old and live with my family in Muborak,Uzbekistan, which is my hometown. My native language is Uzbek and I am looking forward to improving my English during the trip to New Zealand. I will get enrolled in university soon and I am passionate about computer programming. I would be grateful if you could provide me with some information about your house and family.

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with, I would prefer to live in a single room which has enough natural airflow.

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, I am a vegetarian and hope that it

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not be a big problem for you.

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, I would like to learn more about your family’s daily routines, like the games you like to play together, the type of TV programmes you watch and so on.

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could help me to participate in all your routines like a relative. I am very eager to meet you in person. By the way, I have already bought the plane ticket and would be happy if you could meet me at the airport.

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is my first time in New Zealand. I will hopefully arrive on September 18, at 10:00 am, Wellington time. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Umida Abdumajitova

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task achievement

You have responded well to the task, addressing all three bullet points. However, elaborating a bit more on your background or expectations from the program could provide a more complete response.

coherence cohesion

Consider using linking words or phrases to ensure smoother transitions between paragraphs, which would enhance the flow of your letter.

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Your letter has a clear and polite tone, which is very suitable for this kind of communication.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing of your letter are appropriate and add to the overall formal tone.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

249 words

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