You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisemnt for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter . Describe the training course you want to do . Explain what the company could do to help you . Say how the course will be useful for your job

Dear
Mr.
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William, I am writing
this
to request our organization's support to complete a certified training, which was advertised in
last
week's
sunday
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daily. The training focuses on duotone graphic design concepts and
tailored
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to niche designers in the textile industry.
Additionally
, renowned experts are brought in to provide a live session on dimensional graphic design. Due to our organization's latest footprint in the textile domain, the training would enable
to
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increase my competence in
this
unique space. From time and budget viewpoints, it will be immensely helpful
if
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in

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our organization is able to support me in
this
activity. As it is scheduled on weekdays until forenoon, I would appreciate
if
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our leadership team approves my absence as mandatory learning hours.
Furthermore
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the training expense is exorbitant
,
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apply

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and would like to get a pulse if our company would like to invest a considerable budget for
this
activity. I am positive that
this
course would accentuate my creative thought process and productivity. After successful completion of
this
training, I will be provided not only with a licensed designer certificate
,
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but
also
a free subscription to a plethora of Graphic designing
tool
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set
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. I look forward to hearing from you which would allow me to proceed
further
. Yours sincerely, Subbu Arumugam Gandhi
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