It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance sports or music, and others are not. However, itvis sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Talent
leads to
sucess
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
successes
and passion to achieve something which is most desirable. It is always said that, few are born with
talent whereas
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talent, whereas
others are not.
Although
if a child has a dream to achieve something great, they can be moulded into a good artist at any point of time. In my opinion any individual can gain
sucess
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
in any field of work if they have strong determination and will power. Born with
talent
means being God gifted for a particular quality,
for
instance having
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instance, having
good skills to play a certain
sports
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sport
or to have a soulful voice for singing.
Such
children are blessed and they don't have to put much
efforts
Suggestion
effort
to develop a
talent
. They are
benfited
financial assistance in time of need
benefited
benefitted
with certain factors which others try to
persue
carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in
pursue
parse
all their lives.
Such
younger ones are more noticeable in the crowd and most appreciated for their skills. They may achieve more success in their careers at an early stage as compared to other people.
For example
, the Indian team captain Virat Kohli has gained immense
sucess
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
successes
and fame worldwide for his amazing skills in cricket at a very young age.
Although
there is no certain age to develop a
talent
. People who are not born talented and want to lead a successful career in music, arts or film industry join various
academis
a secondary school (usually private)
academies
academics
academic
which focuses to develop their talents so that they can achieve their dreams.
However individuals
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However, individuals
efforts and focus is
also
important in achieving so.
Such
people put all their efforts to be the best and don't give up
easily even
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easily, even
after struggling for
longer period
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a longer period
longer periods
of time.
For instance
Bollywood actor Irfan Khan was known for his amazing acting skills globally even though he was not born with
such
talent
.
T
hus,
the state or fact of existing
being
began
I believe beign born talented doesn't a
lways
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
leads to
sucess
, people who try very hard and are passionate can le
ad to
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
sauces
successes
fame and
sucess
too
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