It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance sports or music, and others are not. However, itvis sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Talent

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leads to

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sucess

an event that accomplishes its intended purpose

success

successes

and passion to achieve something which is most desirable. It is always said that, few are born with

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talent whereas

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talent, whereas

others are not.

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if a child has a dream to achieve something great, they can be moulded into a good artist at any point of time. In my opinion any individual can gain

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sucess

an event that accomplishes its intended purpose

success

in any field of work if they have strong determination and will power. Born with

talent

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means being God gifted for a particular quality,

for

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instance having

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instance, having

good skills to play a certain

sports

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sport

or to have a soulful voice for singing.

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children are blessed and they don't have to put much

efforts

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effort

to develop a

talent

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. They are

benfited

financial assistance in time of need

benefited

benefitted

with certain factors which others try to

persue

carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in

pursue

parse

all their lives.

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younger ones are more noticeable in the crowd and most appreciated for their skills. They may achieve more success in their careers at an early stage as compared to other people.

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, the Indian team captain Virat Kohli has gained immense

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sucess

an event that accomplishes its intended purpose

success

successes

and fame worldwide for his amazing skills in cricket at a very young age.

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there is no certain age to develop a

talent

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. People who are not born talented and want to lead a successful career in music, arts or film industry join various

academis

a secondary school (usually private)

academies

academics

academic

which focuses to develop their talents so that they can achieve their dreams.

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However individuals

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However, individuals

efforts and focus is

also

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important in achieving so.

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people put all their efforts to be the best and don't give up

easily even

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easily, even

after struggling for

longer period

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a longer period

longer periods

of time.

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Bollywood actor Irfan Khan was known for his amazing acting skills globally even though he was not born with

such

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talent

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.

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hus,

the state or fact of existing

being

began

I believe beign born talented doesn't a

lways

an event that accomplishes its intended purpose

success

leads to

sucess

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, people who try very hard and are passionate can le

ad to

an event that accomplishes its intended purpose

success

sauces

successes

fame and

sucess

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too