It is easy to manufacture glass bottle. do you agree with this statement?

The diagram illustrates the
process
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by which
glass
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bottles are manufactured to the consumers. Overall,
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is a manufacturing
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, consists of 3 main stages with 11 steps, starting with collecting used bottles from customers and ending with packing
to
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in
the supermarkets. At the beginning of the
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, used bottles are being collected from the customers. They are recycled at the collection point.
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, these recycled bottles are being delivered on a truck to transport. After being washed under high pressure water, they are separated into 3 types: clear, green and brown.
This
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process
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is following
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is followed
by transporting 3 types of distributed
glass
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to
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glass factory
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glass factories
a glass factory
in order to
converted
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convert
into many pieces of
glass
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. Those pieces are
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burned in
furnace
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a furnace
the furnace
at a high temperature. After being heated, recycled liquid
glass
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and new liquid
glass
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are put into mould to have a permanent shape.The final stage of
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process
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is filling and packing to
delivered
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deliver
to the supermarkets for the customers.

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