Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful to protect rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

On the one hand, there is

belief

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a belief

that zoos are becoming

agressive

having or showing determination and energetic pursuit of your ends

aggressive

to wild animals, and

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ought to be locked, while

contrary view

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the contrary view

holds that zoos are helpful to preserve endangered animals. I personally believe that it is a great idea to hold and breed

such

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species

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who are

at

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on

the verge of extinction, in the zoos.

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essay will discuss both the perspectives. The people who think staff and

vistitors

someone who visits

visitors

in zoological parks are behaving inhumane to our natural creatures because the cages are cramped and animals require enough space in order to feel stress-free environment.

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,

such

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animals

does not have

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do not have

access to move freely in zoos as they live in forests. Panda and polar bear,

for example

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, move vast distances on ice in their everyday life,

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, zoos are unable to provide them suitable weather conditions in which they live naturally.

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, zoos seem unfavourable for wild

species

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, and

demaded

request urgently and forcefully

demanded

to be closed. The concept of closing the parks is often countered by those who

unferstand

know and comprehend the nature or meaning of

understand

that human interference directly affect the natural habitat of animals.

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the government has strictly restricted the illegal hunting, poaching of animals and deforestation, people still break these

resttictions

a principle that limits the extent of something

restrictions

in order to

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

their needs. Owing to the continuous human practices, animals are losing their lives as well as their homes, and are becoming extinct, while some have declared endangered. The tigers and

blacbucks

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are example of some rare

species

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which are preserved by the government of India in the national parks and kept in wildlife

sancturies

a consecrated place where sacred objects are kept

sanctuaries

for breeding, unless it would be

diminised

impaired by diminution

diminished

completely. Eventually, it is crucial to open zoos to protect endangered

species

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. In conclusion, most people consider that zoos should be closed as it seems pathetic and worse place for animals. Whereas, in my opinion, zoos are the best place to save animals from

further

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extinction.

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, captivating

species

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in zoos is the way to reduce the level of animal deaths.