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Some people think that governments must insist on preserving traditional appearance of old buildings undergoing renovation or redevelopment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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We are living in a modern world with everything is developing. That's why people still struggling with two problems. Maintain old things that the previous generation left behind or rebuild everything according to the society's standard. Let's take a look at
first
 opinion. As you knew that old buildings contain many features and they send
message
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messages
 from the previous architecture. Each masterpiece brings us many stories that hardly can be found in our modern world. That's why the old buildings are very valuable to us. But everything
can not
can not
cannot
 resist the power of time. People found that nowadays many buildings need to renovate a
lots
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lot
. And the citizens believe that the government should preserve the beauty of those old buildings. They don't want to change the appearance of the buildings because it's like a bridge which connect two generations together. But many points of view
has contrasted
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have contrasted
 that idea. They think that it is too dangerous for the citizens because if those buildings fell, the damage would be unpredictable. That's why they ask the government has to replace all that
buiding
a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place
building
bidding
binding
 into a new place
that is
 built strongly. Another reason is they want to upgrade their city's appearance
by
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of
 many new and modern buildings. To sum up, I believe that both extents all have its reason and all for the good thing. But I think the past is still a part of our life. It reminds us how can we live in
this
 beautiful world and it would be precious if we could preserve it.
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