As a result of tourism, many historical buildings and sites are being damaged beyond repair. What could be done to prevent it?

International visitors and
tourist
have helped the many
nation
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nations
to uplift their failing economy, Thailand is considered to be one of them.
However
, it brings the deterioration of the heritage of their ancestors as well. To preserve the historical constructions and sites
their
in or at that place
there
are many measures can be taken which will be detailed in
this
essay.
To begin
with, imposing the special tax to the foreigners to will help the government to rebuild the historical structures or even repairing them. To put it another way, the special
department
should be formed which will look after the heritage buildings for repair and re-construct and to run
this
department
the
earning
the excess of revenues over outlays in a given period of time (including depreciation and other non-cash expenses)
earnings
from taxes will be grateful and welcomed.
For example
,
Nigeria which
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Nigeria, which
is considered to be one of
the poor
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the poorest
nation but
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nation, but
is developing through
tourist
for their forest. They have a made
department which
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department, which
were assigned
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was assigned
to look after the shortfalls and damages to the forest.
Furthermore
, awakening the
tourist
for the importance of these sculptures to their local will help the
nation
to protect these buildings and sites. To elaborate in another way, the schooling
department
should be formed which will educate the foreigners after the arrival to their country.
For instance
, in North Korea when any international
tourist
enter
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enters
their
nation
, they are allowed to go anywhere before they attend the 3
hours
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hour
session with the
tourist
expert which guide them about the laws of their society and the vital importance of their cultural heritages. To conclude, the tourism cannot be banned just to conserve the historical sites and buildings. It
bring
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brings
the innumerable opportunities not only for the nations but for the individual as well. Whereas, schooling them like North Korea and forming the authority to maintain them like Nigeria will help in some extent to save the ancestor pride.
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