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In many countries, people decide to have a child at a later age. Why is this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, many couples are delaying
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parenthood as the job market is saturated and resources are limited to a certain class in society,
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 it has many consequences which will be discussed in
this
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Firstly
, couples do not want to have a child in
early
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 years of marriage for the reason that many want to focus on
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their career
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career
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 and raising
financial
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their financial
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 status,
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they can provide their offspring
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healthy and lavish life,
along with
this
 many people want to enjoy social gathering and
traveling
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 which will be difficult after having a kid since it is hard to balance the life both ways, especially for women.
Secondly
, there are some good amount of drawbacks
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delaying to
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 a baby, some people believe 30 to 40 years age is perfect for making money and career growth, but having
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offspring after 30th can cause many health issues
such
 as Down syndrome, serious genetic problems. Delay in parenthood is
also
 affecting children’s growth, learning and understanding
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 younger one because of the huge gap of years
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 two generations, as your child is in
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university and you are about to take the retirement which can be delayed in order to fulfil your responsibilities towards your kid.
To conclude
, it is believed that many want to delay having a child in order to have a career or financial growth
also
 many want to enjoy their social life, but the benefits are healthier than
drawbacks
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.
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