you are a student at University of Sydney. Your ID card has been stolen. Write to the Local Police Station, giving details of who you are, what happened and asking what you should do to get a new ID card.

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ABOUT MY MISSING IDENTIFICATION BADGE WHILE TRAVELING BY BUS YESTERDAY THAT INCLUDES MY WHOLE COLLEGE BAG TOO. I AM A INTERNATIONAL STUDENT IN THE PROGRAMME OF DENTAL HYGIENE AT THE SYDNEY UNIVERSITY SINCE 2018. AS I USED TO STAY WITH MY FRIEND IN THE

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, NEED TO COMMUTE BY PUBLIC TRANSPORT DAILY TO ATTEND THE CLASSES. YESTERDAY, WHILE I WAS TRAVELLING TO THE

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THE BUS, SOMEONE THEFT MY BAG WHICH I HAD KEPT ON THE OTHER SEAT

TO ME. THE BAG CONTAINS ALL THE

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DOCUMENTS AND MY ID CARD TOO. WHEN I

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ABOUT THE

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TO THE PUBLIC TRANSPORT DRIVER,

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REPLIED THAT I SHOULD GO AND COMPLAIN ABOUT IT TO THE NEAREST POLICE STATION.

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, COULD YOU PLEASE ASSIST ME WITH

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PLEASE ADVISE ME ABOUT THE PROCESS TO GET A NEW ID BADGE. I DO HAVE

COPPIES

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OF STOLLEN ID CARD IF THAT WOULD BE ENOUGH TO OBTAIN ALL THE

IFORMATION

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INFORMATION

ABOUT ME. OR ELSE, I AM

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PROVIDE ALL THE NECESSARY PAPERS TO REGISTER FOR THE EW BADGE. IT IS MY HUMBER REQUEST TO

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ME THROUGH THE WHOLE PROCESS. I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO

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A POSITIVE NEWS FROM YOU SOON. THANK YOU YOURS FAITHFULLY

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you are a student at University of Sydney. Your ID card has been stolen. Write to the Local Police Station, giving details of who you are, what happened and asking what you should do to get a new ID card.

The plans below show the layout of a university's sports center now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Some say that reading newspapers and watching TV news is a waste of time, because it has no direct connection with people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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