Some people think that it is good for a country’s culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Other think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both view and give your opinion

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have been taking

place for the outlook that whether importing external TV channels or manufacturing local programs are acting as a finest contributor to the culture of a country. Though both kinds of entertainment form possess its own perks, I still side with the domestic film

industry

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. On the one hand, various merits are harvested through international TV telecasts, doing wonders for cultural diversity.

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, it makes the presence of manifold genres, bringing a huge of plenty selections for audience in terms of content.

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Thus, it

can be deduced that individuals would be

broden

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broadened

broaden

horizon about distinctive national culture more comprehensively, linguistic learning

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to that, the emergence of overseas shows could perfect the flaws of our nation’s recreational

industry

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, date back to 2000s, Kpop and K-dramas from Korea

pervased

spread or diffuse through

pervaded

extensively via broadcast on TV took diverse countries by storm, specifically with juvenile. In light of

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phenomenon, numerous domains have a predisposition for altering into an up-to-date pattern of film

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based on Korean underpinnings.

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, interior music products would gain appropriate innovations which

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closer to adolescent. On the

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hand, through several compelling rationales, domestic entertainment

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obtains

a pivotal role in a country’s civilization. It must be acknowledged that the elitist of a nation is presented most aesthetically by its own film

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industry, hence

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it fosters

inhabitant’s perception

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the inhabitant’s perception

about customs and traditions more honestly. Obviously,

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acquisitiveness is utilitarian to preserve our manners. Another authenticated evidence is that with the prompted progress in internal recreational media, it assists job chances

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of

people with their dissimilar positions

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as actor, director, MC,

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with the view to boosting forcefully the economy of

country

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the country

a country

countries

, enhancing the cost of living at once. With these aforementioned reasons, I am entire in

favor

promote over another

favour

of the idea that producing movies and shows locally promotes considerably to each country

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In conclusion, whether it is more beneficial to make

domestically

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domestic

or extrinsically, it depends on the habit of each citizen. It would be harmonious if we could equalize both kinds of

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