Some people believe that education is the key to tackling hunger worldwide while others feel that the answer is in food aid. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In recent years, the acute problem of worldwide famine has become the most discussed one. With the concern being expressed over whether

food

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dificiency

the state of needing something that is absent or unavailable

deficiency

deficiencies

can be resolved by supporting with products or education is a trigger for eliminating

this

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issue, there emerged two opposing groups. I side with the

second

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approach, in as much as it allows a person to apply for professions with quite high revenue. The primary reason why people believe that maintaining with

food

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is the solution to starvation arises from the fact that it is fast for being delivered and

efficient

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efficiently

when a lot of people are suffering from hunger.

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is because

food

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provision is the

first

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necessary help that comes to mind when people are starving to death.

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, notorious charity organizations,

such

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United Nations Organization

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the United Nations Organization

, provide impoverished countries of Africa with

food

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mainteance

activity involved in maintaining something in good working order

maintenance

mountains

every year so that

peole

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

would not die.

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, I agree with those who regard education as the main key to fight against famine. The reason for

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is that individuals who are talented and educated have

better chance

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a better chance

to find work with high income and at the same time enjoy it.

This

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means that those people will have no excuse to complain about hunger and poverty.

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, an educated businessman

posesses

have as an attribute, knowledge, or skill

possesses

potencial

existing in possibility

potential

potentials

to contribute to the

socity

an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization

society

and improve his financial

disposion

the act of making up your mind about something

decision

than an uneducated one. The principle is similar in all other sections as well. To sum up, the education is not the solution to only starvation, but to the majority of problems in the world.

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in additional
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also
for example
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therefore
however
although
even though
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

262 words

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Some people believe that education is the key to tackling hunger worldwide while others feel that the answer is in food aid. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

The tourism industry has grown enormously over the last fifty years, and there are few places which are unaffected by it. However, tourism rarely benefits the countries which tourists visit. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Cheaper food is now available because of greater use of fertilizers and improved machinery. This improved production, however, can be harmful to individuals and the community. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? Discuss, including examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Countries with longer working hours enjoy an economic advantage, but they suffer from certain negative social effects, do you agree or disagree?