Some people believe that education is the key to tackling hunger worldwide while others feel that the answer is in food aid. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, the acute problem of worldwide famine has become the most discussed one. With the concern being expressed over whether
food
dificiency
can be resolved by supporting with products or education is a trigger for eliminating the state of needing something that is absent or unavailable
deficiency
deficiencies
this
issue, there emerged two opposing groups. I side with the second
approach, in as much as it allows a person to apply for professions with quite high revenue.
The primary reason why people believe that maintaining with food
is the solution to starvation arises from the fact that it is fast for being delivered and efficient
when a lot of people are suffering from hunger. Suggestion
efficiently
This
is because food
provision is the first
necessary help that comes to mind when people are starving to death. For example
, notorious charity organizations, such
as United Nations Organization
, provide impoverished countries of Africa with Suggestion
the United Nations Organization
food
mainteance
every year so that activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
mountains
peole
would not die.
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
Nevertheless
, I agree with those who regard education as the main key to fight against famine. The reason for this
is that individuals who are talented and educated have better chance
to find work with high income and at the same time enjoy it. Suggestion
a better chance
This
means that those people will have no excuse to complain about hunger and poverty. For example
, an educated businessman posesses
more have as an attribute, knowledge, or skill
possesses
potencial
to contribute to the existing in possibility
potential
potentials
socity
and improve his financial an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
disposion
than an uneducated one. The principle is similar in all other sections as well.
To sum up, the education is not the solution to only starvation, but to the majority of problems in the world.the act of making up your mind about something
decision
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