You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match
Dear Rohit,
I hope that you get well soon. I came to know about your ligament tear injury from Julia. I felt so sad when I heard that you could not participate in the cricket
match
last
saturday
as your doctor has advised you to rest for one month. I know that you are waiting for my letter to describe Change the capitalization
Saturday
you
about the Change preposition
to you
match
you were so eager to play but could not play due to your leg condition.
You will be happy to know that it was your Rajasthan team
who won the match
. Both the teams Rajasthan Royals and Kings 11 Punjab played equally well but it was the last
over that turned out to be the game changer
. Add a hyphen
game-changer
Opening
toss was won by the Punjab Add an article
The opening
team
who chose to bat first
and scored 265 runs
The weather condition was very good that day as it was a bright sunny day with optimum temperature conditions. The pitch was also
in perfect condition but by the end of first
half weather took a drastic turn and it appeared that it was going to rain any Correct article usage
the first
second
. The players of your team
did not lose their focus for a single second
. Rahul scored a century and was LPW out after scoring 109 runs. As soon as the strongest batsman of your team
left the cricket field there was sudden silence on the field and all the spectators became sceptical about the winning of your team
. However
, after his exit
it was Gautam who pitched in and scored a Add a comma
,exit
half century
and Add a hyphen
half-century
further
took the team
to victory. During the last
over it started raining slightly and your team
needed seven runs in six balls. Vikram scored a sixer in spite of the extreme pressure and weather conditions and your team
won the match
. Rahul got the man of the match
trophy.
All teammates missed you during the match
victory and it was an extremely emotional moment for all of them. They celebrated the victory with a bottle of champagne in the dressing room and said cheers while hoping for you to get well soon.
Hope to see you soon on the playing field.
Warm regards,
Ravi
Warm Regards
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite