The reason why people buy products is to fulfil their needs and because of the products’ quality. Advertisements don’t increase products’ sales; they can only be considered a form of entertainment. Do you agree or disagree?
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Humankind invests in commodity to accomplish their requirements due to the brand trait. While I agree that the publication of stock can merely be regarded as a source of cheer along with the boost it gives in merchandise’s marketing.
First
of all, I believe that people should only buy the products which they love to use
, and which they want to use
. Secondly
, Even if you watch an advertisement which guarantees that they are the best among all the other brands, but no
you have to just in the historical present; at this point in the narration of a series of past events
now
use
the product
which you often use
. For example
, if you think that your favourite celebrity is branding for them, and even they say that they also
use
that product
, but no! They do not use
that product
. It is all written in their script and they are forced to say that, just because they have been paid for
the concerns. That’s why it is more important to Suggestion
to
use
the product
which you often use
, and of which you are fully confident to use
.
To conclude, I strongly believe that the people are going to use
the product
which they feel that it is worthy to use
for themselves, and Advertisements are only for the sake of convincing people to use
the company’s product
entertainingly. This
is because, it makes people happy watching different types of advertisement, which make people jolly, and also
makes the customer's mood light and gentle.Submitted by SHIV DESAI on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite