You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • say why he/she would not enjoy going to college • explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her • suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her Write at least 150 words.

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Are we happy? Everyone tries to be happy, without worries about the job, the
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or the future in general.
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just a few
people
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, or nobody, reach
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real happiness. According to an online questionnaire, most
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crack up thinking about
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, realizing it is never enough for all we need. Younger
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, 16 to 25 years old, didn't get a stable job, or they are
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underpaid
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under paid
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, working many hours per day.
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are bonded to the past
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when
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needed to save
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to survive. They are unable to spend
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when is not strictly necessary, cutting down even the electricity if they have financial worries. In my experience, I'm almost 30 years old, and I feel anxious about the future. I have to improve on my job, taking exams to get a fixed position; I have to buy a house and I'm thinking about a family,
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I must worry about
money
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. The workplace plays an important role in reaching happiness. The questionnaire shows that secretaries live some enjoyable
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at work, laughing and chatting every day. Contrarily taxi drivers are much more unsatisfied
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their workplace.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Real-world experience
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • On-the-job training
  • Student loan debt
  • Personal growth
  • Professional networking
  • Career development
  • Skilled workers
  • Job market
  • Career goals
  • Immediate income
  • Professional relationships
  • Market demand
  • Defining interests
  • Educational investments
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