At present, the media affects people’s lives significantly. What impact does this have on society? Is it a negative or positive development?

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It is argued that, the news sources’ has left their strong impact on

society

. At the current time every

persons

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person

are read

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is reading

is read

has read

reads

the newspaper and watching television news regularly

Although

, It is not beneficial for human being. Because,

base

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based

this

published information man and women make their opinion

for

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the world. Today’s, the digital media and other source of media’s like newspaper, T.V news, internet, e-paper, etc.

are

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Are

playing

important role

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an important role

people lifestyle

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a person's lifestyle

person's lifestyle

the person's lifestyle

. In the

society

every morning the men and women are showing or reading the news and by

this

information they

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information, they

are getting knowledge about politics view, local area activities, educational data, entertainment, etc.

For example

, by the public survey of

Communication department

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the Communication department

of Gujarat in 2019, 75 % people

has accepted

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have accepted

had accepted

that

media

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the media

has

very useful role

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a very useful role

to passed information and aware normal citizens for currently running situation.

Although

, the media is not always good for human being. The reason for

this

base

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based

on that

sources some

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sources, some

data are

inconvenience

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inconvenienced

and inaccurate.

Now a days

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Nowadays

, the majority member’s of the

society

’s blindly trust on

this

news and base on that they will create their view for some companies, politicians, celebrities, famous person, etc. As the result, Sometime the media are

influence

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influencing

society

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wrong ways and it is not good for citizens.

For example

, at 2009, the wrong news published

into

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local news paper

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a local newspaper

local newspaper

the local newspaper

local newspapers

about Aalen industries and the news is that, the industries are bankrupt.

Thus

, people are blindly

trust

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trusted

trusting

this

news and due to

this

reason the shares rate of

this

companies

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company

has lowdown. In conclusion, the media are

also

having a strong control on

people life

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a person's life

person's life

the person's life

However

, Base on news medium data human is making their view

for

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the planet. So, the media are having a negative impact on

society

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At present, the media affects people’s lives significantly. What impact does this have on society? Is it a negative or positive development?

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

To solve the problem of environmental pollution we need to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?

Some people think that social media platforms are useful for business and making new friends, while others think that such websites are harmful. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of social media.

Some parents are worried about the increasing level of violence in tv, video games and other type of entertainment for children's leisure. How does this effect children? How do you think problem can be tackles?

In many countries, students take a year gap after finishing school and work or travel during this period. Should students take a gap year before attending universities? What are the advantages and disadvantages of it?