At present, the media affects people’s lives significantly. What impact does this have on society? Is it a negative or positive development?

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It is argued that, the news sources’ has left their strong impact on

huminity

the quality of being humane

humanity

. At the current time every person is reading the newspaper and watching television news regularly

Although

, It is not beneficial for human being. Because, based on

this

published information the man and women make their opinion of the world. Today’s, the digital media and other source of the media’s like newspaper, T.V news, internet, e-paper, etc. It is playing an important role in

people lifestyle

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a person's lifestyle

person's lifestyle

the person's lifestyle

. In the society every morning the man and women are showing or reading

news

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the news

and by

this

information, they are getting knowledge about the

politicl

involving or characteristic of politics or parties or politicians

political

views, local area activities, educational data, entertainment, etc.

For example

, by the public survey of the Communication department of Gujarat in 2019, 75 % people had accepted, that

media

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the media

has a very useful role to passed information and aware normal citizens for currently running situation.

Although

, the media is not always good for a human being. The reason for

this

, by that medium, some data is inconvenience and inaccurate.

Now a days

Suggestion

Nowadays

, the majority member’s of the society’s blindly trusted on

this

news and based on that, they will create their views for some companies, politicians, celebrities, famous person, etc. As the result, at the

sometime

Suggestion

some time

, the media are wrongly influenced a society and

that is

not good for citizens.

For example

, at 2009, the wrong news published

into

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local news paper

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a local newspaper

local newspaper

the local newspaper

local newspapers

about Aalen industries and the news is that, the industries had bankrupt.

Thus

, investors have been worried after reading

this

news and due to

this

reason the shares rate of

this

company’s has lowdown. In conclusion, the media is

also

having a strong control on the

people

Suggestion

person's

life.

However

, Based on the news medium data human is making their view

for

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the planet. So, the media are having a negative impact on

community

Suggestion

the community

communities

a community

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