Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?
In recent years, a lot of teenagers leave their family in their hometown to gain knowledges or become a breadwinner.
Although
there are several disadvantages of leaving their hometown, I believe that the advantages outweigh any drawbacks.
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To begin
with, there are some advantages in favour of teenagers who leave their birthplace. Linking Words
Firstly
, working in big cities can help younger people to learn and grow better. Linking Words
This
is because big city working fields can give more opportunity to gain better experiences rather than rural's working field. Linking Words
For instance
, working for a company is better rather than working as a labour in rural areas. Linking Words
Moreover
, big cities provide better facilities in their work field. Linking Words
This
can boost younger people's performance to do their job and can lead to maximum result. Linking Words
In addition
, teenagers can get higher salaries. Linking Words
This
due to economic differences between rural areas and big cities area.
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On the other hand
, working in large cities has some disadvantages. The Linking Words
first
drawback is young people's expectation. Linking Words
This
means that big cities might not be the same as what younger people expected. Linking Words
For instance
, young people tend to have Linking Words
expectation
that working or learning in large cities is the same as in rural areas. Suggestion
expected
Furthermore
, big cities tend to have higher fraud. Linking Words
This
caused by a high number of unemployment in big cities which can lead to crime due to economic issues.
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such
as different expectation and higher fraud, I believe that the advantages of leaving hometown to work or to study in large cities are greater than the drawback. Those advantages include to help young people to learn and grow better and better facilities.Linking Words
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