In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by International fast food. Many people think that it is good to eat traditional foods while other believe that fast food is a good choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It’s widely known that one of
the more profitable
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the most profitable
industries of the world is related to fast
food
. Indeed, each day thousands of tons of junk
food
are produced and consumed in every single part of the globe. It goes without saying, despite the fact that it’s a business which plays a significant role
for
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in
the world economy, it’s not an encouraging data for
human’s
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human
global health. Actually, it’s enough to think that, according to Centers for Diseases Control, which consider data offered by the National Health and Nutrition Examination Survey that, examining the daily habits of American people from 2013 to 2016, has found out that just under the 40% of Americans choose to go to the fast
food
rather than a “normal” restaurant every single day.
Thus
, needless to say, that something should be done to discourage people from carrying on
this
nasty habit.
Although
, imposing a higher tax on
this
kind of
food
could be a good answer to fight
this
phenomenon, I don’t think that it may be considered fair to all companies which operate in
this
sector.
Besides
, the massive production of junk
food
is lead by multinationals, like McDonald’s, Subway or Starbucks, and
consequently
a higher tax should be imposed in each single country where they operate and obviously
this
is hardly likely to happen.
Furthermore
, the amount of the tax that
gouvernements
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
could impose on
this
type of
food
will not be so
hexose
an evil spell
hexes
to discourage people who love that
food
.
Hence
, to conclude, it’s better to motivate these companies to improve the quality of their
food
and
also
trying to raise awareness of people, leading campaigns which show the cons related to the consumption of fast
food
on health. People should be conscious of the fact that eating healthy helps to feel and think better.
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