Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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With developing of the
world
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's connection and the ability to access any production regardless of the location of a person, the becoming of some countries similar to each other is not a new topic to be argued. Regarding
this
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phenomenon, I think it is a positive
developmend
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
developments
developed
due to the decreasing of discrimination level and formation of
one
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"nation".
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and foremost, having an opportunity to acquire the same stuff notwithstanding the location will lead to the declining of discrimination in the
world
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. By
this
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, I mean that access
of
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by
anyone to the products that are trended in developed countries will not make people from the
third
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-
world
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places be marginalized. If everyone's appearance is quite the same, people will have less reasons to judge each other.
For instance
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, nowadays, a plethora of
famouse
widely known and esteemed
famous
brends
a name given to a product or service
brands
,
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,
be it Bershka or Zara, have their product around the
world
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.
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, people do not have to travel to America to buy a new pair of jeans from H&M because they have it in their own country. Another point to consider is that being similar to each other can form
one
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intiger
existing as an essential constituent or characteristic
integral
society. If all of the countries have quite the same way of wearing clothes, consuming products, it can lead to the reaching of
one
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of the Sustainable Development Goals
formated
the organization of information according to preset specifications (usually for computer processing)
formatted
by UNESCO. The main idea of SDG is to be Global Citizens, since we are living in
(
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on)
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planet.
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, people should not think that they
are belonging
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belong
to
one
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particular country and think beyond the borders. If those happen, people can solve any problem that currently
occures
come to pass
occurs
in the
world
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. In conclusion, I am convinced that purchasing of the same products all over the
world
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which makes more
contries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
counties
centuries
have less (fewer) differences between each other can be seen as a positive development. In
conseqence
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
consequence
consequences
,
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leads people to not discriminate and be
one
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unit.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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