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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Many people are of the opinion that to live in the same financial plight is better as they are less motivated to take risks in their lives whilst others believe in taking challenges by working hard to uplift themselves.
This
 essay will discuss both the viewpoints and a personal perspective. It
has been see
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has been seen
 that
although
majority
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the majority
a majority
 of the people dislike their work and feel the financial constraints, they do not want to take any initiative to make any reform, because they are apprehensive in taking perils. To illustrate, studies show that in developing countries, people tend to do the same job even though they are not contended, especially the middle-aged people. They assume that changing their work would bring unnecessary monetary burden, since they bear the mortgage and household expenses.
Nonetheless
, there is a segment of people, who do not make any sort of compromise in their lives and career, they accept the hardships and upgrade themselves by making advancement in their professions.
For instance
,
people especially
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people, especially
 millennials, have
more flexible outlook
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a more flexible outlook
 in their life. They can comfortably switch their careers to elevate their fiscal situation. Had not the today’s
big
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biggest
 entrepreneurs taken risks in their careers, they would not have achieved success and excellence. These people possess the zeal and enthusiasm to fight back with their ordeals and reshape their circumstances. To conclude, on the one hand, it depends upon the people
to live
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live
 their life
uncontended
not deliberate
unintended
 by not refurbishing their condition or
on the other hand
, people can perhaps gamble with their careers and reorient it
further
. I strongly believe that people who take a chance to raise their career apparently feel the sense of
contentment not
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contentment, not
 only in their jobs but
also
 in their lives.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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