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The world today is a safer place than it was a hundred years ago, and governments should stop spending large amounts of money on their armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays, every
nation
do
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does
is doing
 numerous activities for
mantain
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maintaining
maintain
mounting
 their
country
. In present years world is a
perfect
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more perfect
 place than the past years as well as respective authorities can stop spend high amounts of
money
 on their society forces. I totally disagree with
this
 notion. I will discuss some of relevant reasons and examples in following paragraphs. There are lots of reasons about the
this
 statement, but
first
 and foremost reason is that every force doing their job very hardly for their
nation
 because they can make their
nation
 safety and protect from any type of fight as well as attack. The
second
 reason is that these forces doing their job around the clock without any demands. Force's always ready for death for their
nation
pride
 they always loyal for their
nation
.
Besides
this
, forces protect
nation
 safe because these
country
 masses can life tension free and does concentrate on their work well. The government should make proper rules and spent
money
 on forces as well as their family because they are
pride
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the pride
 of
country
However
, many masses think the government spent more amount of forces is unnecessary the should spend more
money
 on children's education and build educational institutions and prefect teaching staff for pupils. Because their pupils will future of their
nation
.
For example
, if many people are educated in every
nation
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nation, then
then
 they
country
 grow fast and assist the economy grow of
country
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the country
. To conclude, it is clearly seen that forces are playing vital role in every
nation
 they are
pride
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the pride
 of every
country
. They do the hardest job in their whole life for their
nation
. These forces are
pride
 of every
nation
 so that's why the government should spend proper
money
 on these for make
country
 safe.
Submitted by Amrit Dhiman on

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