You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter introduce yourself say why you are interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my interest in joining your club. My name is Priyanka and I recently enrolled in a DAV

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located near your location. I have been awarded as a national winner in Cricket

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year. Being passionate about sports, I have been thinking of participating in games at my

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, so I can contribute success towards my

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, sports are beneficial to maintain my health and to keep me fit. Unfortunately, our

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does not have these facilities. I saw an advertisement regarding the same and came to know that the club has a wide range of facilities. Could you please provide more detailed information about the facilities? How many people have a membership at your place and how much does it cost? I would be most grateful if you could update me on the above-mentioned information. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Priyanka

neetpunarSun Jan 21 2024

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Organize your letter into clear paragraphs each containing one idea or set of related ideas.

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Use a range of cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, references) to connect ideas within and across paragraphs.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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156 words

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You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter introduce yourself say why you are interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs

In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do think some people might not be happy to give using cash.

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.

People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The government should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?