You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter introduce yourself say why you are interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to express my interest in joining your club. My name is Priyanka and I recently enrolled in a DAV

college

located near your location. I have been awarded as a national winner in Cricket

last

year. Being passionate about sports, I have been thinking of participating in games at my

college

, so I can contribute success towards my

college

Moreover

, sports are beneficial to maintain my health and to keep me fit. Unfortunately, our

college

does not have these facilities. I saw an advertisement regarding the same and came to know that the club has a wide range of facilities. Could you please provide more detailed information about the facilities? How many people have a membership at your place and how much does it cost? I would be most grateful if you could update me on the above-mentioned information. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Priyanka

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7 paragraphs

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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