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Developing countries like Bangladesh should concentrate more on industrial development, instead of agriculture, to achieve better development. Do you agree or disagree?

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
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  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial development = growth of factories, production, and manufacturing
  • agriculture = farming, growing crops, and raising animals
  • developing country = a nation that is still growing economically
  • rural areas = countryside places outside cities
  • food security = having enough food for all people
  • employment = jobs for workers
  • income = money people earn
  • export earnings = money made by selling goods to other countries
  • economic growth = increase in a country's wealth and production
  • infrastructure = basic systems like roads, power, and transport
  • urban migration = movement of people from villages to cities
  • pollution = damage to air, water, or land
  • balanced development = growth in more than one important area
  • food processing = turning farm products into packaged or prepared food
  • living standards = quality of people's daily life
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