the growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issue involved. some people think that the best way to deal with this problem to introduce more physical addtion lession in n the school curriculum .to what extent do you agree or diagree?

IN the recent year

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there are surge in

number

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the number

of

owerweight

usually describes a large person who is fat but has a large frame to carry it

overweight

people.

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although

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Although

may people

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

believes

that overweight people

goes

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go

to the health care clinic

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for

with

advice how to reduce the weight it is good.

but

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But

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

think in

revese

change to the contrary

reverse

manner and

agrre

be in accord; be in agreement

agree

agreed

agrees

to

this

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statsment

a message that is stated or declared; a communication (oral or written) setting forth particulars or facts etc

statement

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my

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My

inclination giving ensuing

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paragraphs

.

out

away from home

Out

of all argument my strongest view point is bulky

peolple

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

to do more physical

activites

any specific behavior

activities

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it

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It

can help in

reduce

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reducing

fat

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they

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They

go to

gym

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the gym

and other school

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and

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And

start to full nutritional food like vegetables

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low fat food

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,

juice without

suger

a white crystalline carbohydrate used as a sweetener and preservative

sugar

. A good example is

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my v

weight

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Weight

was 67 kg before 3

year

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years

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,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

realised too much

deases

an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning

disease

were

come

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coming

due to overweight.

and

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And

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

started loss my weight with gym and dieting

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The

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not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

either

othr argument is people sho

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do not

don't

dont go health card hospital