Many people say smoking should be banned and some say it is not a good idea what is your opinion on this ?
Smoking is dangerous for the health of both,
smoker
as well passive Use synonyms
smoker
. Thereby, it's Use synonyms
is
argued that smoking should be completely Suggestion
been
banned but
it would not be fair Accept comma addition
banned, but
with
smokers. Suggestion
to
Hence
some alternatives and be Linking Words
fallowed
to conquer the adverse effect of smoking on the others life.
To start with, there is no doubt, taking make it possible through a specific action or lack of action for something to happen
allowed
followed
breath
in effective air by cigarette is as harangue for individual as one person who is smoking. Suggestion
a breath
breaths
Linking Words
Consequently
, Not only Suggestion
Consequence
smoker
's life in danger, but, all people's lives who are involved in surrounding, because of its cause thousand Use synonyms
patient
Suggestion
patients
of
cancer Suggestion
with
are fighting
for their lifeSuggestion
is fighting
,
Accept space
,
everday
. found in the ordinary course of events
everyday
Linking Words
Moreover toxic
ingredients in cigarette Accept comma addition
Moreover, toxic
pollute
to airSuggestion
pollution
,
when that air inhaled by Accept space
,
risporatory
patient, children, pregnant women for pertaining to respiration
respiratory
long time
Suggestion
a long time
,
that works as position. Accept space
,
As a result
, baby born Linking Words
in
Suggestion
with
this
condition might suffer many Linking Words
disorder
.
On Suggestion
disorders
other side
, Suggestion
the other side
totally prohibition
on the smoking is unfair with Suggestion
a totally prohibition
Use synonyms
smoker
. It is like snatching their freedom from them. According to Suggestion
a smoker
smokers
the smoker
survey
Suggestion
the survey
surveys
,
80% addicted people start their day with smoking. Without smoking they can not be able to provide Accept space
,
well
performance. There would be Suggestion
good
big chance
of loss in productivity
Keeping all aspects in mind, there are Suggestion
a big chance
Palthora
of alternatives to tackle Suggestion
a plethora
plethora
this
situation. Linking Words
First
of all, awareness among the people can solve plenty of Linking Words
problem
. Suggestion
problems
As a
Linking Words
result some
people might be quiet smoking. Accept comma addition
result, some
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Moreover they
start avoiding Accept comma addition
Moreover, they
public place
at smoking time. Suggestion
public places
Last
but not least, there must be Linking Words
rule regulation
Suggestion
rules, regulation
rules regulation
such
as fat penalty for Linking Words
person
who is caught smoking Suggestion
a person
the person
at
public placeSuggestion
in
.
In the conclusion, smoking should not be banned Accept space
.
becaues
it would not be fair with addicted peoplefor the reason that; on account of
because
.
But it should be banned at public place. For Accept space
.
this
government and individuals need to come together to face Linking Words
this
problem.Linking Words
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