Nowadays, in some countries, children are given fewer responsibilities compared to the past. Some people believe it is a positive development, while others argue otherwise. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people often argue that, children have been taking

less number

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a less number

of responsibilities when comparing to the earlier decades whilst others have

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an

opposite mind set about

this

which they mentioned a positive

changement

about

this

matter.

However

, I believe that, children have become more responsible and optimistic individuals which changed their lives in a better way.

However

,

this

essay will demonstrate both viewpoints in detail. Nowadays, Kids have had become less responsible and irresponsible at certain times. One reason of

this

will be the amount of freedom and

independence spending

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independence, spending

on unnecessary activities or addiction towards social media.

This

will

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result

to several circumstances

such

as anti-social activities, academic failures, relationship problems and health related problems.

Consequently

, children are no longer able to listen to sound advices

instead

tend to follow their own instinct.

In contrast

,

recent study

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a recent study

done by the

Califonia

a state in the western United States on the Pacific; the 3rd largest state; known for earthquakes

California

University revealed that, more than 35% of students who under 11-15 age group in

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the 2nd smallest continent (actually a vast peninsula of Eurasia); the British use 'Europe' to refer to all of the continent except the British Isles

Europe

countries, significantly,

clevar

showing self-interest and shrewdness in dealing with others

clever

clear

and smart during their internship programs.

In addition

,

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the article

further

demonstrate

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demonstrates

that, students will able gain practical knowledge in the fields of

they

of them or themselves

their

studying which

also

assured them to gain better careers in their future.

For example

, In

australia

a nation occupying the whole of the Australian continent; Aboriginal tribes are thought to have migrated from southeastern Asia 20,000 years ago; first Europeans were British convicts sent there as a penal colony

Australia

many fast food

restuarants

a building where people go to eat

restaurants

run by the young employees who are in 16's.

This

will help to boost their personality and allows to improve their personal skills. To conclude

this

, it can be said that, it is necessary that

younger generation

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the younger generation

to hold certain responsibilities. Perhaps, there are some matters

arised

come into existence; take on form or shape

arise

raised

arose

when sharing the responsibilities among the individuals.

Nonetheless

, I believe that, children can improve their lives when they taking

responsbilities

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibilities

responsibility

in their

lives whether

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lives, whether

it is at

work place

a place where work is done

workplace

, school or in their families.