There are many reasons that can motivate a person to stay working for the same company. Some believe that money is the main reason. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that, there are so many factors are available, that can inspire a human being to doing their
job
in the same industries. While, others are thinking that, the increment in the
salary
, it is the core
reason
behind to staying with the same organization.
This
essay totally disagreed with
this
statement. The
reason
for
this
, the
money
is the primary
reason
to motivate a person for doing
a
expresses position, direction or location, or point in time
at
work
as well as all the man and women are doing a hard
work
only for earned
money
.
First
of all, the
money
is the most important
reason
for all working human
being
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beings
. So, how can be
consider
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considered
that the
money
is not a main
reason
for
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to
motivate a citizen to do their
job
for the same office. The
money
, it always inspired a
people
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person
to continue their
job
with the same factory.
For example
, the latest report published in 2020. By the times newspaper, they said the more than 80% employees
have been continues
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were continuing
are continuing
their
job
with the same company only for that the
reason
is, they are getting a high pay scale
compare
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compared
comparable
to the other industries.
Secondly
, the people around the world are doing a hard
work
only for earning good
money
and they will live a better life. Everybody on the planet, trying to
gives
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give
a
best
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good
better
performance as per their skills like, someone
have
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has
good physical
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a good physical work skill
work
skill or
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
have a brainy
work
skill. But, at the end all are doing their
work
only for the
money
. If any company it has
good
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a good work environment
work
environment. But, that company not offered an attractive
salary
.
Then
, an intelligent employee does not
work
with them.
For instance
,
My
refers to the speaker or writer
I
friend
shera
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Shera
share
. She is working as a software engineer, in the automation tech.
since
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Since
2 years. That company’s
work
culture is very good. But, they are not given an attractive increment.
Thus
, my friend is thinking about to change their office. Because, only for a better
salary
option. In conclusion,
This
essay is completely unfavourable with
this
statement that, the
money
is not a main
reason
to inspire a
men
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man
and women to stay working with the same industry. If the people getting an attractive
salary
option.
Then
, employees are easily changed their organization.
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