It is often considered that changes are more beneficial to people than traying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of changes overweight the disadvantages?

At most of the time people feel bored and never get any source of inspiration and motivation in their daily growth which affect their mental and physical health. By creating small changes in the lifestyle people feel motivated and healthy. Physical appearance nowadays matters a lot, which plays a vital part in the every part of the lifestyle
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If we compare the advantages which are more than the disadvantages. The bottom line is people are making certain changes in their healthy lifestyle by adapting new eating habits and physical activity. Frist by adapting healthy activity people have less health problems which help to run their daily routine
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will improve the mental health and prolong their social development. If the people are working the would be innovative
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