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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advances in technology which can prevent and solve crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The development in the field of science and technology is believed to curb and resolve problems concerning illegal activities in the present scenario, at a scale regarded to be unprecedented than ever before. Just like many folks who support the fact, I too agree for reasons that I shall put forth and
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consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
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 from the perspective
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 a nation and an individual level. For a country, having set up teams equipped with novel facilities and a centralized data of its citizens, helps to stop the occurrence of
crime
 in many ways.
Firstly
 the location of any delinquent could be tracked by using technologies like GPS or face recognizers and by installing chips, thereby halting any chances of impending
crime
.
Secondly
, surveillance cameras allow for solving criminal cases by the provision of evidences of the
crime
 scene.
Thirdly
, the biometrics and credit cash transactions of any
potent
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potential
 criminal are recorded in secured databases of the governing authorities that become sources of examination.
For instance
 the credit rating system prevalent in many nations acts as a database that allows financial institutions to be more cautious on availing loans for citizens who have a bad credit history. The awareness of sophisticated technologies and the knowledge of being monitored render caution among individuals.
Moreover when
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Moreover, when
 cases pertaining to crimes are broadcasted on media, it is ensured that no one is oblivious of the proactive measures undertaken by the police forces and
crime
 investigation teams.
Additionally
, in some nations having a past record of
crime
 often prevents the individual from enjoying certain civil rights. People
therefore
 refrain from indulging in any unlawful activities.
Therefore it
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Therefore, it
 could be inferred that criminal cases have been effectively reduced by the implications of development achieved in the field of science and technology.
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