In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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, senior citizens
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taken by the government. It is a completely fine; if the authority of states
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should pay
a bill for the old people’s healthy lives. The older person had given their contribution in their United’s development. Sometimes, the family member does not have enough money.
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taken by the nurses, which are appointed by the authorities of nations. More ever, the government’s has been paying for their health
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bills
also
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other expenses. It is completely sound Ok because, that senior person has given their contribution by paying a
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to their country from 25 to 30 years.
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, by the economic news report in 2020, the United kingdom’s community
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is paying
total 40000
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pounds
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. When, the governments will have been to
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spend
have spent
only 9000
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pounds
for their
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older
citizens.
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, the family does not have to take charge of their elder’s expenses. They are thinking that, their parents and grandparents were paying a enough
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to
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in
their country. Behalf those, nations must have to take their responsibility. When, they are retired or physically week and they need help from
states
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the states
. Sometimes, some family is not too wealthy.
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, they are not capable
for gives
stop blaming or grant forgiveness
forgives
their old person’s expenses cash.
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, by the report of the family development department of the UK, more than, 67% man and women
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have believed
believe
that, the Britain government had taken a
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from their senior citizens. So, the authority of united are must have
to gives
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given
money for elder’s lives. In conclusion, It is not a good to give a
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caretaker
bill’s burden on
family
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the family
families
. The old humans were given their valuable contribution
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to
their nations.
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,
government
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the government
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aging population
  • Elderly care
  • Nursing homes
  • Social welfare
  • Intergenerational responsibility
  • Caregiving
  • Financial burden
  • Quality of life
  • Pension funds
  • Healthcare policy
  • Taxation
  • Subsidies
  • Private insurance
  • Long-term care
  • Sustainability
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