In some countries, young people do not take care of their elderly relatives. Instead, they appoint trained professionals who take care of the elderly. Is it a positive or a negative tend according to you?

Nowadays, there is a trend of hiring young
professionals
by
children
to oversee their
parents
.
This
essay will discuss the positive and negative aspects of
this
new trend and I will give my opinion about it.
To begin
with, hiring experts for elderly
parents
or relatives brings several advantages. One of the most important reasons behind
this
is
the
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youngsters do not have sufficient time to give to their elderly
parents
.
For example
, there are many
businessmen's
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businessmen
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, managers,
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and CEO's
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CEO's
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who hire
professionals
to take care of their
parents
.
Moreover
, many people
which
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have to migrate to other countries for job opportunities or may
be have
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to commute to work far
also
employ these specialists.
Furthermore
, these
professionals
are experts who
caters
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to the specific need of older people. Building
right
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diet plans, mild exercises and some vitamin medicines, may make the elderly lead a healthier life.
On the other hand
, hiring
professionals
may have some negative aspects as well. For some
parents
it is an emotional issue, they may feel alone when their
children
are not there to hear them.
Therefore
, It can lead to division in their relationship.
In addition
, many elderly people start facing several mental problems if their
children
are not physically present for them.
For example
, forgetting things, depression, and stress.
To conclude
,
although
both
children
and
parents
may feel emotionally separated when old age caretakers are hired, sometimes it is the need
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the hour and leads to a happier and less stressful life for youngsters and healthier old
parents
.
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