The following maps show some of the changes that have taken placein Dubai in recent decades Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons while relevant
The pictures showed the changes
to
Change preposition
in
dubai
in the past and the present day
Looking at the pictures Change the capitalization
Dubai
it is clear that
the area has developed considerably. The only remaining thing was the clock tower. In the past, there were a few buildings on both sides of the road and this
area was covered in sand and trees
By contrast
, there have been lots of developments in dubai
in the present day. Change the capitalization
Dubai
In particular
, many skyscrapers have been constructed at the side of the road. In the past. There were not any vehicles, in contrast
to the
Correct article usage
apply
present day
Add a hyphen
present-day
dubai
, the traffic has developed incredibly, which can be seen by the Change the capitalization
Dubai
increase
number of people driving cars. Replace the word
increasing
Further more
, a great quantity of tree has been planted around the edge of the roundabout.
Correct your spelling
Furthermore
Overall
, dubai
has Change the capitalization
Dubai
been
developed and modernized significantly over the Unnecessary verb
apply
last
year, providing more facilities for the people living there.Submitted by Ki on
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