In many places new homes are needed but the only place available for building them in the countryside .some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What’s ur opinion about this ?

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new homes are highly necessary in the several communities

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however only

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outskirts are vacant enough to accommodate new constructions and

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few people believe that countryside’s needs to be protected rather than make new homes or buildings.I clearly endorse

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viewpoint due to the damage has done to the environment by the human interference. Fundamentally

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the human population has grown by the leaps and the bounds.

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the needs of people are

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exponentially increased

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henceforth

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human race exploiting the

nature

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and has had detrimental effects which are deteriorates the balance of ecosystem and

nature

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intact.If people are persisting

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tendency would worsen the situation,

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the government and the people should put the best foot forward to mitigate

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menace.

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, developed countries like USA and UK have rigid rules for building constructions, which have predominantly protected the

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preserves.

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if people started to occupy the countrysides

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it will affect the indigenous

biome

rigid connective tissue that makes up the skeleton of vertebrates

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where many micro living organisms only could thrive in less human populated spheres.

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, it is vital to to protect the inhabitant of flora and fauna.

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much

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to outskirts has damaged the environment and global warming is one of the dire consequences of it.

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many animals and plants are on the brim of extinction due to the human extensive misconduct. Suffice to say,

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people need more homes since population flourished

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occupying countryside would not be a solution for

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due to the severe damage humans already made to the

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and we have yet to know that what is stored for the future in the unfathomable turn of time.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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256 words

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In many places new homes are needed but the only place available for building them in the countryside .some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What’s ur opinion about this ?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Today, many people do not know their neighburs in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area. Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build homes in the styles of their own choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

You have recently ordered an item from the internet, but are not happy with the purchase. Write to the company. In your letter •Describe what you purchased • Explain why you are not happy with the purchase • Tell them what you would like them to do about the situation