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Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad in order to learn about other countries. Others think that this is not necessary as you can learn everything from the internet or television.

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It is
debatable issue
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a debatable issue
 among the members of
society whether
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society, whether
 it is crucial to have trips in order to gain
information
 regarding other countries or there are a plethora of sites for finding about other nations on the Internet. In my opinion
,
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,
 one can acquire more precise and valuable knowledge while
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
. On the one hand, people think that there is no need for
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 in order to get
information
 about other countries. The principal reason is that there are a great number of websites that are loaded with interesting facts regarding numerous countries. By way of illustration, if someone wants to learn diverse
information
 about Paris
,
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,
 she/he can quickly search it on the internet and find plenty of useful
information
.
Additionally
, learning details on the television or google is free of charge and you are not supposed to spend considerable money.
Besides
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,
 it is not a time consuming process and you can learn anything just in seconds. If individuals dabble in learning
information
 regarding other nations, they will avoid squandering time
.
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On the other hand
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,
 I believe that it is crucial to visit countries in order to learn in-depth
information
.
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.
Firstly
, experiencing the culture and traditions of the
country in
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country, in
 reality
,
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,
 the
information
 they received will be embedded in
individual's memory
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an individual's memory
.
For instance
,
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,
 you are heading to New York and particularly want to wander in Central Park
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.
 You can be mesmerized by the
substantiality
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substance
 of that park and breathe in the fresh air, or even have a picnic there.
This
 way they will feel the city and will be more likely to remember it forever.
Moreover
,
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,
 while travelling you are learning thorough
information
.
For example
, you are interested in cuisine of Italy and by
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 Italy you can not only
learn but
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learn, but
also
 taste the wide range of delectable food including
caprese
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Caprese
copies
 or lasagne. In conclusion, while many people believe that it is possible to gain adequate knowledge about numerous nations through Tv or the Internet, I think that while
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 you can absorb valuable
information
 and gain unforgettable experience.
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