It is often said that governments spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important? Do you agree or disagree?

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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Topic Vocabulary:

biodiversity
ecological balance
safeguard
natural habitats
foster
cultural of conservation
long-term ecological sustainability
economic benefits
significant source of revenue
investment
nation’s economic wealth
preservation of ecosystems
clean water and air
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multi-faceted government budgets
environmental protection
wildlife conservation
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