It is often said that governments spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important? Do you agree or disagree?

It is frequently
told
being the one previously mentioned or spoken of
said
that authorities contribute a huge
amountamount
Suggestion
amount amount
on a mission to take care of spices. While there are several causes that are significant. I certainly disagree with
this
notion that administration execute a lot of saving
founa
being satisfactory or in satisfactory condition
fine
fun
.
however
Suggestion
However
, I
also
believe that problem
such
as education and health are more important.
To begin
with, today the threat to forest animal are increasing at an alarming rate because of human intervention.
This
is because of they have started to destroy their habitat.
As a result
authorities spend a lot to protect
such
spices which is near to endangered.
For instance
, in 2015 local authorities initiated to
built
Suggestion
build
a zoo under the program of "Save Endengerd Spices". Which lead to huge success.
However
, There are different sorts of other
sector
also
where ministry contributing a plethora of
amount
. Education remain a priority
sector
for the ministry in spending a large
amount
to boost them.
For example
, in 2018 bought more than 10% were given to the education
sectorsector
Suggestion
sector sector
.
In addition
to
this
, healthcare is another aspect where government contributed bigger
amount
. To illustrate
this
, in 2018 budget spending of medical
sector
was over 20%. Apart from
this
, other
sector
Accept comma addition
sector, such
such
as media and telecommunication, sports, arts and science
also
got the large
amount
of money. To conclude, I totally disagree that administration spends too much on protecting wildlife. Despite spending wildlife there are several
sector
Suggestion
sectors
such
as education and health care are
also
well funded.
hence
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
Hence
, it is acceptable to say that government spend in different
sector
instead
of an individual.
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  • biodiversity
  • ecological balance
  • safeguard
  • natural habitats
  • foster
  • cultural of conservation
  • long-term ecological sustainability
  • economic benefits
  • significant source of revenue
  • investment
  • nation’s economic wealth
  • preservation of ecosystems
  • clean water and air
  • prioritization
  • multi-faceted government budgets
  • environmental protection
  • wildlife conservation
  • neglecting
  • detrimental effects
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