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The typical teaching situation of a teacher and students in the class will not exist by the year 2050. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Education has been a major concern in today's world. Some people believe that the traditional teaching method will not continue by the year 2050. In my opinion, while the online
system
 has gained popularity, the standard method of teaching never disappeared. On the one hand, there couşd be several reasons why people think the standard teaching will not exist. Advances in technology pave the way to remotely education for students and educators which student can contribute to the subject and teachers provide the information about their classes. And
also
 it is possible to video
system
 as a recorded before to educate students. In recent days we have witnessed the situations because of the
coronavirus
relating to or characteristic of carnivores
carnivorous
 outbreak. People maybe want to educate their children in the isolation area to alleviate the risk.
On the other hand
, the online education
system
 as not much effective as like in class. Researchers say that it is too hard to deeply focus and cover the subjects for students online. Teachers do not just give subjects and
also
 teach the children the ways of life. Students learn how to socialise, make a friend and other emotional aspects to possible counter in the future. And
also
 students whose parents both work, they need to somewhere to continue their educational life. In conclusion, I strongly believe the popularity of the online education
system
 has been an increase.
However
, schools
are not place
Suggestion
are not places
are not placed
don't place
do not place
 where
student
Suggestion
the student
students
learn
Suggestion
learns
is learning
has learned
has learnt
 to just
subject but
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the subject, but
the subject but
also
 they learn the ways of life in practical and emotional. So I strongly believe, the typical learning
system
 will continue.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology advancements
  • virtual learning
  • online education
  • individualized learning
  • personalized learning
  • facilitative role
  • collaborative learning
  • evolve
  • adapt
  • social interaction
  • communication skills
  • teacher-student relationships
  • flexible learning
  • lifelong learning
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