In many places, new homes are needed, but the only spaces available for building in in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new home there. What is your opinion about this?

In recent years, housing spaces are essential as the world population increases. While the majority of people think that it is not a right
place
to build new houses in
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
as it needs to be protected from build a house, I believe that it is good to make a new residence outside the
city
.
First
of all, it is good to build new houses in areas outside the
city
. It is because the sectors
that is
working in that area can be developed more as many people in that area will visit and buy from that store. As an example, a supermarket
that is
located far from the
city
centre will gain more customers as many people live there and they need to buy basic needs to live their life.
As a result
, the country's economy will increase and more people can have more job opportunities and get higher wages.
In addition
, making new buildings in
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
will
also
prevent the
city
centre to be overpopulated. If
countryside
are not available for housing spaces, many people will not have a
place
to live in and sleep, and
as a result
, many people are unable to find houses and will end up sleep in the street. It can affect their standard of living as they are
quiet
to a degree (not used with a negative)
quite
the same with the poverty.
Also
, lack of housing spaces will make people will not visit that
place
as many tourists prefer to stay over in a
city
rather than to just have a short trip there
that is
a waste of money. In conclusion, it is better to use
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
as a
place
to build new houses as it can be the tourist destination due to the crowds and to avoid overpopulation in the
city
centre.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
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