The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the basic principle involved in a wave-energy
machine
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. For the installation of
this
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machine
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,
know-how
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the know-how
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of the nature of the
waves
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is very essential.
This
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instrument helps us produce tremendous amounts of energy from ocean
waves
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.
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, the principle involves the placement of the
machine
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either in
the
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a
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place that has small
waves
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or large
waves
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. The process consists of
movement
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the movement
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of these
waves
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into the instrument through a narrow opening at the base of the device. As the water level rises, the air present at the top of the water is sucked into another chamber through a minute hole above. The turbines are connected to the electricity generator which generates the electric power from the movement of these turbines by air. The air is in
continuous
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flow from being taken into the
machine
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to being released back into the atmosphere. It is very interesting to note that these machines produce no harmful byproducts and
relies
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rely
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completely on natural forces to produce energy.
This
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process is renewable, thanks to the presence of
abundance
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water on Earth.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words machine, waves with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "waves" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • wave-energy
  • renewable energy
  • electricity generation
  • sustainable
  • offshore
  • machine components
  • energy conversion
  • maritime
  • ecosystem
  • energy efficiency
  • environmental impact
  • marine life
  • flotation device
  • energy potential
  • anchorage system
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