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Some people prefer doing physical activities in their free time. Others think it is better to choose mental activities (such as crosswords and chess). Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Leisure period is one of the best periods in which everyone has their own importance. There is often a
dichotonmy
being twofold; a classification into two opposed parts or subclasses
dichotomy
 in opinion whether, in the free
time
; either the body exercise will helpful or spending
time
 on the creative work or
game
Suggestion
the game
a game
 will the best for human being. In my
view-point
a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoint
, between the workout and the innovative activities; the innovative activities are far more beneficial.
To begin
 with, in most of the organization, they required the person with the ability of creative
immagination
the formation of a mental image of something that is not perceived as real and is not present to the senses
imagination
imaginations
 who helped the firms
to achieved
Suggestion
to achieve
achieve
 its goal.
Surpisingly
Suggestion
Surprisingly
,
this
 can only be accomplished by spending the great extent of the free
time
 in the imaginative tasks. For
exmaple
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
, playing chess can help you in understanding the organizational behaviour, taking the part in the quick mathematic solution games aids you in your
fianance
assets in the form of money
finances
finance
financial
 field and there are many more.
Although
 for the proportion of community it is the waste of
time
, there is a group of people who believed that it is the common necessity of the professional career.
On the contrary
, working to improve your physical fitness has their own importance especially in your relaxed
time
. It helps you fight for the common diseases.
For instance
, blood pressure,
diabetics
a polygenic disease characterized by abnormally high glucose levels in the blood; any of several metabolic disorders marked by excessive urination and persistent thirst
diabetes
 and many more are
most common illness the community
Suggestion
the most common illness in the community
the most common illness the community
 are facing nowadays. When your employee does not
seems
Suggestion
seem
 to medically fit, how will the
company trust
Accept comma addition
company, trust
 with him in their key matters?
Moreover
, the organizations
has now arranged
Suggestion
have now arranged
 the fitness club facility in their
salary benefits
Accept comma addition
salary, benefits
 so they can easily join and spend their free
time
 in the gymnasium. To conclude, despite concentrating on your physical health is far more beneficial, the improvement in your
intelectual
of or associated with or requiring the use of the mind
intellectual
 skill has become the utmost necessity in the professional career.
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