A young person is going to spend his first day at the office next month. Write a letter to explain what he should do on his first day. In your letter, you should tell: – what work should be done in the company – what he/she will do on the first day of work – what items/objects he /she needs to take along.

Dear
Mr.
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Robert, I am writing
this
letter on behalf of Mcorp technologies. I came to know that you are joining us on the 1st of august, and I am glad to assist you with your preparation for the
first
day.
Firstly
, your role is a junior tester under quality assurance. Precisely, you will be making sure that all the products are made in good quality.
Moreover
, on the day of joining, you will be going through all the company's policies. Later, you will be going to read about all products which are made in our company.
In addition
to
this
, Paras will assist you on your
first
day activities, and he is your reporting manager.
Lastly
, you need to bring two passport size photos and one government issue identification document
such
as a passport or driver's licence.
Also
, you need to bring the job offer that
sent
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to you by email. Please feel free to contact me for any
further
information. Yours sincerely, Maan
Submitted by Gurjinder Maan on

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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