Some people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there are only small differences between the richest and the poorest members. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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in other words

, people nowadays think that the most feasible way of producing happiness in

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society is to ensure that there is a low contrast between the rich and the poorest members.

However

, I believe there is a broad difference between rich and poor. Which we will discuss

further

.

Firstly

, there is a financial imbalance between them as everyone knows wealth plays one of the key

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in life.

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, even

though

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if a person is intelligent, smart or good looking those qualities aren't going to fill their stomach.

Secondly

, there is a large amount of inequality in public

such

as they knowingly, subconsciously or unknowingly

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on the basis of

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appearance,

due to

that we don't even know how badly we might have hurt someone's feelings intentionally or unintentionally.

Also

, in

this

corrupt

world

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the poor suffer.

For example

, in some cases the rich pay more incentive and

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the process and

skips

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the line,

however

, the

poorer

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poor

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obeys

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the system since, as their hands are tied in terms of power and advantages

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although

, each and everyone should obey the institution. So,

according to

this

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I disagree a bit with it.

Thus

, I think, a balance should be created.

Furthermore

,

on the other hand

, there are similarities,

specially

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the basic needs of a human being are the same for the penurious

as well as

the prosperous ones.

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,

such

as

:

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food,

cloths

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and house. I,

therefore

, agree with the definition on the

some

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point that it would create a nicer universe if we say that there is just a little diversity among them,

this

would

also

bring

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mental peace for the necessitous and reduce their emotional baggage.

Hence

it could be the best way to bring stability

in

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the environment. To summarize, saying that won't bring a lot of change in their physical situation

,

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but could calm their brains and decrease their insecurity.

Thus

, I believe it should be said out in

open

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to bring a little change.