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the bar below shows different methods of waste disposal in a european country from 2005 to 2008.

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The given bar chart illustrates different procedures of
waste
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 disposal in a European country between 2005 and 2008. Overall, Landfill and Dumping in sea experienced a downward trend in the amount of
waste
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 disposed over the time frame,.Whereas Burning showed an unchanged pattern throughout the period. The amount of
waste
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 put in Landfill
hadreached
Suggestion
had reached
 a peak of 70
million
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 tonnes in 2005.
Then
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 there was a steady decrease in each year, BY around 10
million
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 tonnes.At the end of the period
,
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,
it hit a
lowest
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low
 point of 40 in 2008, respectively.A similar trend was witnessed in the
waste
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dumpeddisposal
Suggestion
 dumping
in
Suggestion
at
 sea.
This
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 figure was about 55
million
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 tonnes, being approximately 15 tonnes lower than that for Landfill by approximately 15.
This
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 number saw a slight
slightly
Suggestion
slight
 fall in 2006, and remained stable in 2007, equivalent to 50 them don
vi
Suggestion
VI
via
vaoo
a numerical quantity measured or assigned or computed
value
food
via
. While
,
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,
Burning was quite high in 2005, about 65
million
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 tonnes, and it dropped
TO just under
Suggestion
just under
 5
million
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.
However
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, the rate showed a noticeable fluctuation from 2006 to 2008.It had a plummet to 40 in 2007 and a surge to 65
million
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 tonnes in 2008, equal to the
beginni
the event consisting of the start of something
beginning
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