In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

It has been seen that it is
tough call
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a tough call
when it comes to select a place for living, especially when buying
one
.
Majority
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The majority
of the nations have suggested that their local people prefer to buy their own property for living
instead
of renting
one
, and it has become a trend now.
This
essay will discuss why
this
trend has become a pivotal nowadays. I contend,
although
it is expensive to purchase an own
house
, still I would say we should welcome
this
trend. To commence with, every individual
have
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has
a desire to purchase his or her personal home where he or she could live peacefully.
This
is because they work hard to purchase a
house
, which will save their lot of money in
long term
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the long term
.
In other words
, it can be said that it is just
one
time of investment, which will definitely going to be double in few years; whereas, paying for rent would not give them any benefit and ultimately they will lose their money. To illustrate, the Canadian government has announced “
First
Home Buyer” scheme, in which
one
gets some extra advantages when they buy their
first
house
,
such
as low interest rate with minimal down payment.
As a result
, 96 percentages of Canadians have their own
house
.
Hence
, I would say other nations should introduce
such
kind of programs to take forward
this
movement.
Secondly
, It gives them freedom to do whatever they like to do in their personal home
such
as renovation.
For instance
, taking myself as an example, when I was a tenant in Toronto, I wanted to install a music system in the
house
, but my landlord
did not gave
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did not give
has not given
me permission to do that.
Furthermore
, by having an own shelter, it gives a
satisfaction
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satisfying
of pride.
One
feels relaxed and can enjoy
lavish lifestyle
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a lavish lifestyle
lavish lifestyles
without any interference of landlord or any rule.
Thus
, having an own
house
imparts ample of privilege, which we should
considered
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consider
as
one
of the reason for
this
movement. To conclude, eventually it is personal choice whether
one
wants to rent a
house
or buy
one
;
however
, I deem that renting could not save finances, while home ownership can save money in the longer perspective.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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