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what are some important qualities of a good parents? use specific details and examples to explain your answer.

I am fortunate to have good parents, so it is easy for me to identify the qualities that make them good.
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 my point of view, parents are considered as the
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 teacher of the child. In order to be a good
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parent
, these qualities are unconditional
love
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,
trust
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, and respect
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, the unconditional
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 is one of the most crucial features in proper development of the children. They nurture their child and keep them from harm. As an example, the children who grow with loving parents, some children become good manners.
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, the ones who grow by themselves without the parents’
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, are more aggressive. To have a good society, the
love
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 of parents becomes necessary.
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, part of unconditional
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 is
trust
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. My parents
trust
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 us to do what is right.
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, without parents’
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, we are not confident that. They
trust
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 us, so we
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 them, we would never do anything to hurt.
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, I believe that respect is the most important thing. It is an essential for all people who deal with children.
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, if the child is good at the History subject at schooling, the parents will not angry.
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 of annoying, they must have encouraged him or her to better in studies. It is may be more difficult to intend because they know their strengths. In conclusion, the qualities of a good parents are too numerous to name. It
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 depends on the situations,
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, all parents must have the qualities of
love
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, believe, and admiration.

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